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By LilGryphMaster
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23 March 2005 |
A poem inspired by the ancient German "fairy-tale" of the same name. It is set on the Rhine River in Eastern Germany. Her golden comb shines at the peak
Her eerie song is what I seek Her long, blonde hair plays catch with the wind
Her unspeakable beauty my heart does mend She sits on her mountain
I stand in my ship
Her eyes like a fountain
My eyes on her lips She makes my heart flutter
Whilst the rocks break my rudder As she blinks
My ship sinks |
Think I get it
Written by idlemusings (80 comments posted) 4th October 2005 | Kind of a German siren type of thing?
Liked it except the last two lines seemed to lack the punch they should have had.
But then I know naught about poetry.
Liked it though. |
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