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Poetry
Love Hearts
By no1butClo
23 April 2007
A bit of fun.

BE MINE
let me use the little adjective
that sparks green fires in my head.

TEASE ME
bend my senses past their breaking point
cram my nerves with tension 'til they burst.

HUG ME
hold on to this much flesh, this much
I've never let go of without a fight, before.

TRUST ME
not to leave you hanging - I'll bury
my contradictions in the dust for you.

CALL ME
before I stop listening.

Reviews

Written by stevetroster (1398 comments posted) 23rd April 2007
'Good' fun. 
:)
Takes me back
Written by patterjack (1055 comments posted) 23rd April 2007
When younger I bought them , but never passed them on-- even to the grand passion of that 12 year old moment . Though myself consumed by love , I consumedthem instead 
 
Some happy thoughts neatly framed in this ! 
 
patterjack

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