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Ilegal Beauty
By lyrikal_myrikal
23 April 2007
Another debate:
Rizzla's or Swans?
Unless you got rips,
I like those ones!

F**k it,
Let the Skinner decide;
No-one really gives a shit:
Just make it long and wide!

You got a grinder?
Lost mine.
No worries, if you can't find it,
Should crumble fine!

Mix it up with some number 1
Chill out geez, thats all my bag gone!
Gonna be a right off after this,
But thats cool, this buzz is pure bliss!

Made you a roach mate,
Found a random pice of green.
How many sheets you used? 8?!
Thats the biggest f****n spliff i've ever seen!

Crease it,
Lick it,
Roll it,
Stick it.

The masterpiece is done,
Lets go outside an schmoke!!
But i'm winning 2-1:
Wait til half time then we'll all go toke!

Finally!! Mad scramble for shoes,
Grab coats an head for the door.
Step outside ready for substance abuse,
Can't wait anymore!!

Skinners Privelige, so pass the light.
Thats an absolute beast mate!
Burn off the end , hold it up to the light.
an inch wide, and 9 straight!

Sparks up, takes a drag,
Everyone watches in anticipation
By look on your face i'd say we needed more fag,
Pure skunk = f****d up situation!!

Pass it here geez,
i wanna puff on this HARD!!
F**k, you hear my chest wheeze?
After this monster my lungs are scarred!

Reviews

Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 23rd April 2007
I guess many readers have had a go, probably not many to this extent. By the law of averages, there could be some of us here who have gone a lot further. Not sure what this offers. 
 
Phil.
Offers?
Written by stevetroster (1549 comments posted) 23rd April 2007
Nothing. 
Those who have, already know. 
Those who haven't, probably don't want to

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