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Fire
By LilGryphMaster
23 March 2005
Another funny one. This one is in the spirit of Cows.. But different

Fire, Fire, everywhere
Fire, Fire, burned my hair
Fire, Fire, on the stairs
Fire, Fire, don't you dare!

Fire, Fire, burned my dog
Fire, Fire, scorched the logs
Fire, Fire, thick black fog
Fire, Fire, ...what rhymes with 'og'?

Fire, Fire, drink this water!
Fire, Fire, don't hurt my daughter
Fire, Fire, I'll call my lawyer
Fire, Fire, you'll never catch her

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Written by Waterdeep (3 comments posted) 28th March 2005
Very funny - I like the 'og' line especially. However, I think you could have gone with a stronger closer; maybe even a reversal. As it stands, the close is only a half-rhyme and thematically leaves the end a bit limp.

Written by IPFaulkner (83 comments posted) 10th June 2006
Utter madness and great for it! 
 
IPF

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