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The Greatest
By lyrikal_myrikal
25 April 2007
In your mind
Are you confined
To a thousand mental fights

In your head
are you blinded
By a thousand ringside lights

Is it what you wanted
Is it what you dreamed
Do you regret what you achieved

Though the price you paid seems so high
When i saw them rise; I knew why

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Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 26th April 2007
Context takes it's toll on this one. I probably wouldn't have thought about Ali if you hadn't explained it at the beginning.  
 
Nice form. You have these little phrases that catch me: "ringside lights" - pretty.

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