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| By michelle | ||||||
| 26 April 2007 | ||||||
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For Andre I imagine putting my arms around your waist, And i hold your waist tightly, As i press my head against your chest. My teary eyes, I close them as the tears burn my cheeks. A hug... To assure me that everything wil be alright. A hug... To tell my restless soul that patience is all i need. A hug... For a future after the storm. The hug fades... Like pale blue skies, Like the horizon, The line on the ocean which seems too distant to reach.
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really sweet. I like the repetition of 'hug'. It's a word that gets taken for granted sometimes.
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