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Leather
By bwoz
30 April 2007
I've never sailed, this is based on a dream, I am not sure if the slang is accurate. The term "leather and lye" has to do with the treatment of leather in past centuries -- the tanners would rub it down well with lye sollution and the leather would become as hard as wood but much lighter, and could be nailed and hammered and used for shoring up parts of ships. Of course, the lye also created severe cracking of the leather, so the look of leather and lye simply means the old sailors visage was very scary and wrinkled with early aging.

"Half in the hole and half away now," 
Comes a call down from the height.  Now                                       
there's barley malt and the wright
Old salt, givin' free men ire to fight. He's a
strong one when he's been drinkin'
and all trouble when he cries. But, three men
it took to pin him once drinkin' all the while.
Old sailor, with the saber wit and 
the look of leather and lye
" All away now, full up and taut."
comes the echo from the hales.
Fixed in chains for the open mane
Face to the storm now she pales.  He's a
strong force at the gatherin' hoist when
all troubles caught the sails, but three men
 fell from her grace in that rage once gripped
 in those burnin’ gales.  And he, the bold one,
ship's balance at hand, stood fastened, leather and nails.

Reviews
nice sounding
Written by mmSeason (32 comments posted) 1st May 2007
The sound - rhythm n rhyme - and atmosphere are pleasing. Not many poems actually "tell" me to read them out loud but this does. I haven't a clue about the jargon either. You do need to tidy up the line endings so eye and ear agree. 
mand
Leather v.2
Written by bwoz (125 comments posted) 24th May 2007
I put the original line breaks in, don't know why they were gone first post. BW 
 
"Half in the hole and half away now,"  
Comes a call down from the height. Now  
there's barley malt and the wright 
 
Old salt, givin' free men ire to fight. He's a  
strong one when he's been drinkin' 
and all trouble when he cries. But, three men  
 
it took to pin him once drinkin' all the while.  
Old sailor, with the saber wit and  
the look of leather and lye 
 
" All away now, full up and taut."  
comes the echo from the hales. 
Fixed in chains for the open mane 
 
Face to the storm now she pales. He's a 
strong force at the gatherin' hoist when  
all troubles caught the sails, but three men 
 
fell from her grace in that rage once gripped 
in those burnin’ gales. And he, the bold one, 
ship's balance at hand, stood fastened, leather and nails. 
 

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