This was written in response to a letter I recieved. It has a relation to the Crimson Goddess poem, but I won't go into that.
I caught a glimpse of you
Back from whence I came
I know where you are now
I can sense your pain
I've crawled through the valleys
I was drenched in the rain
I've died in the alleys
I've been buried by shame
You're not alone...
Not in your sorrow,
Your anger, your pain
I've felt what you're feeling
I've seen what your seeing
Open your eyes
Shed your fears
Silence your cries, dear
Wipe away the tears
Escape from this madness
Crawl from the darkness
I'm here for you now
Grab hold of my hand
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Hi again
Written by spiderbaby49 (137 comments posted) 30th March 2005 |
I love this
We all need someone to grab hold of sometimes, even if for the briefest of comforts.
spidey
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Written by B.D. (82 comments posted) 31st May 2006 |
I haven't read much of your poems, but this is among the best of the best that I have read...in a long time. Great, awesome, super job!!  |
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Written by KateRussellVampress (5 comments posted) 20th March 2007 |
| i love this too. It has such heartfelt emotion oozing from it. The empathy and feeling strikes you instantly. The rhythm of it is a little hard to follow, but the words more than compensate. |
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