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| Systems Failure | |
| By Zatari | ||||||
| 01 May 2007 | ||||||
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This is a song I've written about the three people I care about most. I can't write music by the way, so I guess technically, it's just a poem. But whatever. Enjoy! Systems Failure Chorus: I never realised how hard growing up could be My life was going great until I hit thirteen My systems are failing and I don’t know what to do Is there someone who can help me, someone I can tell my problems to? My girlfriend and my two best mates Keep trying to slit their wrists I’ve been trying to explain But they still don’t get my gist I wish that they could only see What their self-harming’s doing to me Killing, murder, suicide It’s all the same: You’re ending a life Chorus I’m “too kind-hearted for my own good” It’s nice knowing she cares And she says I worry more than I should About other people’s affairs Everyone’s problems in my head People wishing they were dead Killing, murder, suicide It’s all the same: You’re ending a life I can’t sleep, I’ve gone off food, I think I’ve fallen in love If he exists, he’s got a grudge against me, the homophobic God above
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