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| Blood and salt | |
| By Zatari | ||||
| 01 May 2007 | ||||
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Another song. This time it's just about my best mate. Enjoy Blood and salt What is it I’m doing wrong, to take away your smile? I hate it when you’re this upset, and I know it’s all my fault I’m sorry I left you on your own, even for a while It seems I’m opening up old wounds, mixing blood with salt Chorus: I can’t believe I’m doing this Hurting you again and again I promised never to cause you pain This time I can’t lie to myself What I did was wrong Bet you’re wishing I never came along Yes, dear, I’m hurting you, and I’m convincing myself That I had reasons to do this to you again There’s an evil voice inside my head that won’t stay on the shelf It’s telling me that hurting you’s not so bad, as long as I’m still sane Chorus Cuts on your arms, scabs on your wrists Can’t believe that I caused this Cuts on your arms, scabs on your writs Don’t you wish I didn’t exist? Chorus And I’m hurting you, to be with her It’s wrong, I know, but I can’t help myself But I still know it’s completely unfair I didn’t want to hurt you again
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