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My thoughts on Summer parties
By Sunny
01 May 2007
That double-sided tape
that holds my boobs in place
is really restricting.
I'll give up now on dresses
the boys will have to live with that.

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Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 2nd May 2007
I kind of liked this. I've always managed to avoid the double-sided tape issue - too much hassle to my mind for very little reward. Good on ya. 
 
Elli 
 
ps. typo - hlds
My thoughts on Summer parties
Written by CliffBowes (176 comments posted) 2nd May 2007
I like this little offering, but I thought double sided tape was something one used to stick posters to the wall. My mind boggles at whatever it's used for in this poem. I must have led a very sheltered life. 
Nice work though Sunny. 
Cliff

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