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Poetry
It's raining inside
By Sunny
04 May 2007
Paper Mache pieces

In a tundra across the way

And along the carpet

In snowdrops, dewdrops

In them a mine drops

And dirty stains of

Pretty light

All strewn and messed.

 

Blessed is this art

 

This meaningless,

pitiless art.

Reviews

Written by Fledermaus (3238 comments posted) 4th May 2007
Hm... A bit to modern and experimental for me I guess. I'm afraid it somehow wasn't completely clear what it was about... Sorry. 

Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 4th May 2007
Too clever for me. Sorry. 
 
Phil.

Written by fellpony (1580 comments posted) 5th May 2007
reminds me, for at least some of the poem, of a chandelier - breaking light into separate colours and throwing it about. But, as I'm not sure about some of the other parts of the poem, I could be very wrong :)

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