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| By rilLie | ||||
| 06 May 2007 | ||||
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I haven't written in a while, I know. :( I've been quite busy with my "part-time" job (which ironically takes up most of my time) and a few other sites I'm on. I've focused more on visual art and drawing lately that I haven't written that much at all. To the result that when I do feel like writing, my brain tells me I can't. Anyways, I've been trying to cure this disease by joining VisualLit: http://visuallit.deviantart.com where Visual artists can make images for other Writer's pieces, and writers can write written responses to certain images chosen for the week. I wrote this for Zaichick's piece of the same name: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/51668089/ . The sad outlook of the image is, of course, reflected on the poem, but some of my own experiences found their way here as well. :P I hope you guys like it! :D A distant chord sounds amidst, and shadows dance across the floor. Blue eyes shine as memories come, full of life, and love, joy, and more. A touch of light I see up front -- a glimpse of heaven I perceive outside -- through the window a wolf's galant joy, I look and remember what used to be mine. A beautiful man runs to my arms, I blink and he is gone. Treasures appear: my home, my love, they vanish one by one. Voices whisper, all to me. Was I too fragile and weak? I give another step; another fall as tears stream down my cheek. Until when angels loose their wings, and when every captive's free, I'll be here, and I'll be yours, remember, love, eternally.
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