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Poetry
To God
By AnnieSeed
09 May 2007
I think this one really does speak for itself.

It's hard to see you sometimes
But sometimes
In the scudding of clouds in a pearlescent sky
In boats sailing on the river
In soft rain on a spring day
In the sparkle of frost on the pavement
In a harvest moon
Indigo sky studded with diamonds
In the peal of church bells on any day
In the colours of autumn and the smoke of wood fires
In the promise of new life when buds come
in the faithful love of many years and
In the hazy eyes of newborns
I think I do.

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Written by Fledermaus (3506 comments posted) 9th May 2007
Original. I like the 'indigo', starting with 'in', but a different type of phrase. :)
I agree with you
Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 5th September 2007
I think you are more likely to God in beauty and also in peace than anywhere else. I loved your poem with all its images. I do hope that you continue writing poetry because I haven't seen much coming to GW lately. Please don't give up when you have the gift of seeing so many beautiful images and writing about them.

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