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By amoryblaine
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09 May 2007 |
???? what have you done? a smothering indistinctness of betrayal as perceptions darken. once we tasted wonder, glad-hearted and glad-hearted, but your desire died. a deadened cloud of agony - emotions follow hate, follow love, love bled dry. in a burst of hate, i reject you |
Written by Phil (6999 comments posted) 9th May 2007 | Sorry Amory, I just can't connect with this. Clever words that say little for me. Perhaps I'm on an off night - getting very little from the poetry I've read so far. Phil. |
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