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| By AnnieSeed | ||||||||
| 09 May 2007 | ||||||||
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I wrote this a few years ago after the death of a pet cat. She had hypoglycaemia which makes an animal lose weight rapidly even though it eats ravenously. This led a neighbour to believe we were starving her, and he turned up on our doorstep one evening to reprimand us. In telling me off, he mentioned that he'd given her a whole pint of milk to drink. Cats of course don't tolerate cows milk very well even when they're in the best of health, the milk gave her severe diarrhoea and she died two days later. It was a short journey Carried in his arms Out from the kitchen where we found you Deep in your last untroubled sleep Into the sunlit garden where we laid you By the lavender and hollyhocks Beside the shady trees. And we remember still the waving tail The wide green eyes that lost their glowing fire The assertive voice that dwindled to weary silence The heart of such high courage and determination and The valiant spirit that bore you out into the unknown dark Where now you hunt mice and bats and voles Beneath an ever-waxing moon.
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