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I Remember It All
By bloodange77
09 May 2007
Blame my mind and heart for this one.

Every Word,
Stuck in my mind.
Every action,
Played over and over.
Every pain,
Mine to keep.
*
I have your words,
Here in my aching heart.
I kept your actions,
Flesh wounds come to life.
I will keep the pain,
Forcing me to a bitter end.
*
And they play,
Over and over again.
In my heart,
In my mind.
I can't take this,
Take the pain away.
*
Your words,
Are a relentless torture.
Your actions,
Are a bitter memory.
Your old love,
Is the beginning of my pain.
*
I have your words,
Here in my aching heart.
I kept your actions,
Flesh wounds come to life.
I will keep the pain,
Forcing me to a bitter end.
*
All those things,
Killing me inside.
In my heart,
In my mind.
I don't want this,
Take the pain away.

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