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GOING SOLO
By CliffBowes
11 May 2007
There's nothing quite like flying a light aircraft on a lovely Summer's day.


GOING SOLO


The Piper Cub and I rush down the runway, building up speed until at last our wheels, no longer attached to the heavy soil of County Durham, leave the ground and upwards we soar, free as a racing bird released from its travelling box. The airport buildings look like models, surrounded by tiny trees with the river Tees cutting a winding silver thread through them. I can see the A1 with Matchbox cars making their slow ways North and South. A little wispy cloud at about ten thousand feet keeps the sun out of my eyes. I feel that I could fly up into them and get out for a walk. The words of the fighter pilot poet, John Gillespie Magee kept running through my head.
“Oh, I have slipped the surly bonds of earth and danced the skies on laughter-silvered wings.”
At six thousand feet I level out making a ninety degree turn to the left. Don’t slip, don’t lose height, keep up your speed, adjust your trim. I strive to remember all I have been taught.

Two miles on, I perform another left turn, still at six thousand feet, that’s good. Now call ATC for permission to land.

“Yankee Bravo you are clear to land, runway four-nine, acknowledge.”

“Tees Valley acknowledge Four-nine, Yankee Bravo out.”

Two more left turns put me in line with runway four-nine, I slowly ease back on the throttle and lower the flaps. Speed falls as my altitude decreases. Down, down I go toward the hard concrete runway.

Tyres squeal as contact is made with runway four-nine. Throttle right down and taxi away to the apron.


I’ve made it – my first solo flight.


I’d better exit this flight sim program and get on with some work now.

Reviews

Written by AnnieSeed (128 comments posted) 11th May 2007
This is brilliant, Cliff - very descriptive and I love the witty ending - very surprising!

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3295 comments posted) 11th May 2007
Oh, I am so disappointed. I really thought you were up there doing all those clever turns. Never having been up in a small plane I was enjoying it vicariously. Well you fooled me with it. Very clever, descriptive piece 
J

Written by Lizzy (783 comments posted) 11th May 2007
A well written piece and I didn't guess the end till the end. well described, I was there up in the clouds with you. 
Many years ago on Holiday in the U.S. we visited Grand Canyon and flew over, and in it, in a light aircraft, a Cesner (I think).It was fine till we flew over the edge and then air currents pushed us up, not a pleasant feeling. It was exciting but I was so pleased when we landed. I think I'll stick to the larger variety. 
Well done. 
Lizzy 
 
Cheat
Written by Diplomat (28 comments posted) 11th May 2007
I was getting well and truly drawn into that and you cheated - what a swizz!  
 
Well done Cliff
Yeah swizz
Written by Asferthecat (824 comments posted) 12th May 2007
Nice little piece. I was taken up in a little stunt plane once and the g-force made my face splat out like a pancake (it's better now)

Written by Phil (6635 comments posted) 13th May 2007
Yep, good piece. You'd taken me in. I was up there with you thinking what a lucky sod - I'd love to do that. Amusing little twist. 
 
Phil.

Written by philkent (157 comments posted) 14th June 2007
I'm a very bad flyer but even so I have to look out as we're taking off. It's fascinating to see the earth from that high up, you've captured that feeling perfectly even if it was a twist ending. :grin

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