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Mafia Ode to Joy
By wltshr
13 May 2007
It's all BRN's fault for putting "Ode to Joy" in my head.

Please sing along to the tune of "Ode to Joy". First verse only.

If anyone wants to add verses until we've written the whole damn thing please do so.



Ah Moider


'Moider', bodies in Hoboken

My job was to bury 'em

Police trail completely broken

All that's left is calcium


Dirty snitching cop insider

When the deed was done, I smiled

None more necessary 'moider'

Shame he was my only child.


Chorus.

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Watto Wilty
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 13th May 2007
The 2nd verse also parses. 
 
 
I can't at the moment think of a chorus, 
 
Brian

Written by wltshr (314 comments posted) 14th May 2007
Very witty! 
 
If anyone cares, the complete original german lyric, which I butchered so carefully, can be found here: 
 
http://mx.geocities.com/sergio_bolanos/himnoala.htm 
 
Regards 
 
Wltshr 
 
 
 

Written by Fledermaus (3306 comments posted) 2nd June 2007
A bit hard to imagine this on the music of Beethoven, as I don't have a CD at hand, but it seems to bring across a cruel 'godfather'-message.

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