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Poetry
Cry for Her
By bloodange77
15 May 2007
My friend is going through a really hard time right now. She has a million little things going wrong around her all at once. I wish I could say something to make her smile and remember that there is still a brightside in all situations.

Look to me,
As I look to you.
My eyes will show you,
The light you need.
I will be your,
Shoulder to cry on.
I know no words,
With which to comfort.
Shed your tears,
It might helpt you.
Inside your heart,
You ache with loss.
But remember,
I sit here with you.
I wait patiently,
For your tears to stop.
There is nothing more,
That anyone can do.
In the end,
It will be alright.
All you need,
Is a little time.

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Written by Phil (6838 comments posted) 15th May 2007
I'm sure your friend more than appreciates your loyal friendship. Simple words that convey a deep friendship. 
 
Phil.
Who cares about the title?Your work is f
Written by Superbox (5 comments posted) 24th May 2007
:) A really great piece of work.I love a poem that touches your heart,but the structure of your work is different to any style I have seen before.Thanks for giving me a great piece to read.

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