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| By no1butClo | ||||||
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tried this out on a certain people...sounded positive but I'm skeptical =P too long? I thought so too over-done? Probably salvageable? You decide... [I've sorted the typos now please let me know if you spot more]. Thanks to Brian for help with ammendments of rhythm, form and...well...everything really =) Warm my spine, I may yet crack, These hairline fissures cross my back and trace a picture of each hit I've taken, and threaten to split me. The patterns fuse and spread over my neck and round my head to my eyes, where I read the world like words, and leaves to be unfurled. Rotten, though, is the stuff at heart of these events, each a small part from dark and bigger things, that scare the life from me, should I but dare to look. The simple things are gone, this race no longer works as one for common good or such-like cause that might attract attention, pause the drama that shows how we've turned, and been devoured by our western dog-eat-dog/cat/mouse/child 'ethic' corrupt-excuse-for politic. No wonder, then, when I look down and see my hands are not my own, I've no choice but to assume the role of drone, no conscience, default_SOUL.
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