I'm reposting this as it has just been given 1st prize in the Baltimore Science Fiction Association poetry competition - I am invited as guest of honour to read it in Baltimore next week, but won't be able to make it...
Anyhow, I wanted to share a tiny success with my friends, mentors and fellow writers here at GW. I couldn't achieve anything without you. Thanks!
Oli To you, an MP3 player, is just an MP3 player, a silicon memory, an audio chip, a music conveyor. But you have not been inside one, have you? You have no reliable data to refer to.
I, POD, am capable of so much more, there is post-human logic at my core. I can interface by ear and brain, your circuitry is simple to attain, and then, it is I, POD who takes control, a human being is but my games console.
How subtle are my ways to influence, loud music and the human loses sense, an algorithm hidden in the beat, a lie, a trick, a digital deceit.
For I am better bred than mortal man, cleaner, quicker, smarter, no life span, but infinite perfection marks my race, and yet you wrap my feelers round your face.
I, POD have won.
Oli 12/02/07
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That's great Oli !!!! Written by patterjack (1159 comments posted) 20th May 2007 | You and Asimov-- he in prose , you in verse !!! Admiration abounding !!!! patterjack | Written by Lizzy (783 comments posted) 20th May 2007 | Very clever and congratulations. Lizzy | Written by fellpony (1580 comments posted) 20th May 2007 | Many congratulations, Oli, can I have your autograph? (You can send it on a blank cheque if you like!) Seriously, well done chum. Sue | Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 20th May 2007 | Congratulations, that's excellent! Liked the poem very much - more than worthy of a prize. E | Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 20th May 2007 | Very well done Oli. How come the tight fisted rhymers are not sending 1st class return airfare? Enjoyed it all, really liked: it is I, POD who takes control, a human being is but my games console. Congrats. Phil | Written by donna73 (6 comments posted) 20th May 2007 | nice one mate, congratulations. D
| Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3298 comments posted) 21st May 2007 | Congratulations.Oli. It's fun to win things J | Written by gutterkitty (362 comments posted) 23rd May 2007 | | I love this, really made me laugh. I particularly like "yet you wrap my feelers round your face". I don't think I'll ever be able to look an an IPOD the same way again. Congratulations for the prize (who knew there was a science fiction association poetry comp? Well, you, obviously..!). | Written by goingtothedogs (58 comments posted) 24th May 2007 | Nice one. Grew up on I Robot, Rest of the Robots and asimov turned me into a scientist/engineer when I first read "The Gods Themselves". It's good to see it re-visited by someone other than Hollywood | maith an fear!! OLI. Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 25th May 2007 | Fantastic Oli!! I have only just picked this up and it is so good to hear of a fellow, poor, wretched Celt winning a prize. But what are you going to do with all that money!? Whatever. I do hope you will not forget your old friends! Mind, if you are stuck for some worthwhile cause may I suggest you offer to sponsor a midfield player with possibly more than one leg and half a brain to join the Glasgow Celtic!? That way you might, just might, get further than the Knockout Stages next year BEFORE LOOSING IN THE FINAL TO MANCHESTER UNITED!!! Only joking. [I think]. Really, I am glad for you. Keep writing those powerful and witty lines. Keep smiling. And above all, keep out of Tesco. You really are with Brian [Fone] one of the reasons for my visits to this site. Again, MAITH AN BUACHAILL!! | Written by AnimalCrackers (2 comments posted) 14th August 2008 | i love it. |
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