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| dream theory works in duals | |
| By aleatoric_rhetoric | ||
| 21 May 2007 | ||
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hey sorry for posting that other poem twice i had the itchy trigger finger i have a real hard time listening to anyone else you are not me you are not me your words are not mine and i'm just trying to be the highest standing individual in the whole wide universe and if something has already been said and i accidentally repeated it it feels as if 'I' have just died, sameness superceeding it the creative recluse trying always always always to break loose like hot molten lava errupting from a volcano on the shores of a beautiful island that the natives say is just just just just just just fine as is: and they need nothing more nothing else, they are fine but the volcano errupts firing purity in energy and synergy in spite of misery and mystery and when the solace hits the real world canvas molecules collide and deal with eachother, the creative force iniating the contact on all that was, all that once was that per- fect little island where the mini- malists run: free, wild, content, trying to end the human world and in the beginning, the expression is fiery, perfect, in and of itself, but as it flows outward into that our their island, it slows and permeates and desperately tries to breath in the energy that it traded, screaming "you are not me, you are not me, you are not--" the cooling mystery cascades with my seamless expression, spraying the coast with water that was once cold--the steam rises the latent lava coo ooo ooo oools and our perfect little island is expanded dream theory working in duals.
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