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| Erotica | |
| By goingtothedogs | ||||||||
| 24 May 2007 | ||||||||
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I think this is about as erotic as I'm willing to go in public. I should add that this was not written be sensationalist. I have a wonderful partner and it works for us both.  We talk Of great things and small We drink wine, and sit, together, In the glow of the fire Your eyes lambent in the half-light of the candles Our hands touch, a lace of fingers The warmth of your skin on the cool of mine. Our eyes meet And I see your smile grow The smile that made me captive when first I saw Those eyes reach for me Lust rises. A warmth in me, Curling and twining like smoke through the soul I reach for you To stroke your face. To touch your lips To touch you Wanting you to touch me I see that you watch me My lust mirrored in yours Your gradual smile. The whites of your teeth showing animal joy Pure and clean The love of the soul meeting the desire of the body The heat bursts in me And I grin And pull you to me And I see the light in your eyes I feel your hand on my breast Your mouth on mine Becoming urgent Demanding response Emotion quickens in me The heart beats And the blood sings And the ancient, ever‑new passion surges Your eyes deepen, and glow, darkly bright Your weight on me As your body enters my body As your soul enters my soul Bodies merge Spirits meld And words fail And are un-needed, in the Two that is One I see you, Once more, watching me As you move in me, As your fingers glide over my face, Smiling eyes seeking mine Waiting. I feel the rising The rush It swells. And grows Until, for a short time, The rapture of the physical overwhelms all. For brief moments, there is only the flesh The spirit released. And yet, all the while, I feel your smile on me Your eyes holding me Your gaze willing my joy Delight, in my pleasure But now, I wait. And now, My gaze is on you. I watch you from above, As I move over you I see your breath deepen. And your skin glisten Your eyes deep, half-closed I see you arch And writhe. Tremors of the flesh Head flung back. Eyes tight closed now I feel you pulse inside me Until, after eternal brief moments, you relax. And our eyes meet once more. And, together, we smile......
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