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Who are you
By roy
25 May 2007
      

 A bit of fun
 

    
                  Who are you?

 
Who are you? And where are you from? The document enquired

I was not in the mood for this for I was feeling tired

The first bit was quite easy, as I simply wrote my name

The second part I found I couldn’t answer quite the same

Of course I could have simply written down my home address

Yet where I really came from well, I couldn’t even guess

I knew who Mum and Dad were, I even knew my Gran

So now I started wondering how it all began

 
Now when the earth was forming at the very start of time

All of us were microbes in some thick primeval slime

Some of these small microbes but only just by luck

Developed into creatures and staggered from the muck

Survival then took over, as there was no master plan

Eventually these microbes had developed into Man

 
Then did some ardent caveman feel the overpowering need?

To club some luckless cave girl into whom to sow his seed?

Why did she love his offspring and help it to survive?

Well if she had not bothered then I might not be alive

This applies to all of us; I know it may sound queer

By pure circumstantial chance all of us are here

 
Just who are our ancestors who’s gene bank do we own?

Were they men of consequence or somebody unknown?

They could be despot leaders that other nations feared

Or perhaps just men of God that everyone revered

We know that history tells us tales of love and war and crime

So someone’s ancient ancestors were present at the time

 
Was it your relation, or mine? I just don’t know

Who thought that noise would crush the walls of ancient Jericho?

Someone fought for Genghis’ Khan and someone else sacked Rome

Are these folks descendants sitting with me now at home?

Who was it that started all the European wars?

Was it my relation or was it one of yours?

 
Did relations fight at Agincourt or fight on Bosworth Field?

Or did they fight at Nasby where Cromwell made them yield?

Perhaps they fought for Cromwell and for Fairfax on the day

There is no way of knowing so I really cannot say

They cut the heads off queens and kings there really is no end

Someone did all of these things and from them we descend

 
To all this speculation we should maybe call a halt

For if we are descendants others may think it’s our fault

Sometime in the future it may possibly be proved

My great grandpa did all this fifty times removed

So if some nosy parker should enquire from whence I came

I’ll just say, “I have no idea” in case I get the blame!

                                                                                                                 
roy

 
 
 

Reviews

Written by goingtothedogs (58 comments posted) 25th May 2007
Really liked this. Semi serious but it made me laugh. 
 
:grin

Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 25th May 2007
liked this a lot, a good write

Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 25th May 2007
liked this a lot, a good write

Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 25th May 2007
liked this a lot, a good write

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