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Heart, Spirit and Soul
By sara
25 July 2005
Pressure to be what others dictate
Pressure to panic about body weight
Life is not about fat and thin
It's about your heart
and those within

Pressure to act as a woman should
Pressure to be so 'nice' and 'good'
Life is not about fat and thin
It's about your spirit
and those within

Pressure to obediently conform
Pressure to be the societal norm
Life is not about fat and thin
It's about your soul
and those within

Reviews
Love this!
Written by twriter (117 comments posted) 26th July 2005
I really like this piece's chorus element and also the fact that you have kept it short and simple - a true gem! 
 
TW
pressure,pressure,pressure
Written by darrenmc (54 comments posted) 26th July 2005
yes, sara, you unfortunate women are under so much pressure....liked this. 
Thanks
Written by sara (29 comments posted) 29th July 2005
Thanks for your positive comments twriter and damcouldntfindit

Written by B.D. (82 comments posted) 1st June 2006
I agree with twriter - great work!

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