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The Battle of the Atlantic WW2
By roy
27 May 2007
A tribute to the Merchant Navy who are often overlooked

 
 

THE BATTLE OF THE ATLANTIC WW2

 

UNDER THE OLD RED DUSTER

(The Merchant Navy Ensign)
 
We all know of Mighty Hood that was sunk by a Bismarck shell
We know how many men were lost and the Skippers name as well
The Repulse and Prince of Wales when bound for a Far East post
Both lost to the Jap torpedo planes off the Malaya coast
There’s a film about the Kelly sunk in the battle of Crete
And of the famous River Plate where we inflicted defeat
Though history reveres the ships the Royal Navy lost
It was the Merchant Navy that really paid the cost

But who could name the merchant ships now on the ocean bed
Who could number the sailors lost? Who mourns these courageous dead?
                     No one can doubt their courage or the terrible price they paid
Caught up in the naval conflict on ships that were built to trade
Wallowing along in a rusting tramp supplying our war torn nation
Struggling to make eight knots whilst trying to keep station
  Watching a nearby ship go down when a torpedo struck
seeing your comrades drowning and praying for better luck
 
What of the men on the Arctic run ferrying Russian supplies
Through wolf pack fleets of U-boats and Bomber laden skies
 Crewing a gas filled Tanker some only in their teens
Wondering if they’ll freeze to death or be blown to smithereens
Many a merchant ship now lies under the Barents Sea
Lost in a desperate struggle to set the Russians free
The ocean bed is littered with merchant seaman’s bones
Now to lay forever at peace with Davy Jones

As a Nation we are rightly proud of the R.N. in World War Two
Likewise of the R.A.F and what we owe to the few
To the men who fought at Arnhem and Monty’s Desert Rats
To those who fought the Japanese, to all we raise our hats
From the Home Guard to the S.O.E. in it from the start
All of our Armed Services were keen to play their part
Each had lost so many when they counted the final muster
But the greatest loss was from those who sailed under
 THE OLD RED DUSTER
 
 
 
roy
 
 

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Written by fellpony (1617 comments posted) 28th May 2007
Suitable tribute for a commemorative weekend in America. Your rhyming works quite well - it takes skill to avoid it sounding forced. 
 
My father in law was a merchant sailor. He didn't talk much about it. 
 
One niggle: seaman’s bones = seamen's bones?

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