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Poetry
But Even So
By jdavidgordon
28 May 2007
This was a song that I wrote while in my basement, trying to get off of Codeine. I had just been fired from my job for stealing painkillers.
My original intention, when picking up my guitar, was to write a song of anger.
However, this begrudging and reluctant hymn of my personal dependence on God is what vomited out instead.
That's how it goes some days.

I have taken, like a thief
Just to buy, my relief
Even so, Even so
Grace divine
I have murdered, your sweet trust
Now I'm burning, in my lust
Even so, Even so
You are mine

I have drank, from her cup
I have filled my body up
Even so, Even so
I feel fine
I have mocked, your sweet grace
I have slapped you, in the face
Even so, Even so
You are mine

I have fallen, weak and lame
I have cursed your holy name
Even so, Even so
I know my lines
But you whisper, deep inside
And I scream back, from where I hide
Even so! Even so!
You are mine...
Even so! Even so!
You ARE mine.
 

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But even so -
Written by Josie (2780 comments posted) 28th May 2007
Many of us depend on God and I personally know that he answers my prayers. Luckily, we are told that there is forgiveness and there's always a new day ahead and a new start. You are only human and everyone makes mistakes and has to start again. Don't feel alone.

Written by Phil (6688 comments posted) 29th May 2007
Listening to 'Search Engine' from your MySpace page as I write this. Listened to a few. Liked them all except Good Morning. Like the acoustic sound. Really good stuff. 
 
Your lyrics: 
A nice structure. Hard to imagine without hearing them sung. Have to honest - the content isn't my thing - but each to their own. 
 
Phil.

Written by jdavidgordon (1 comments posted) 29th May 2007
Thank you very much for your kind words.

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