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steam engined mind
By aleatoric_rhetoric
29 May 2007
hey look i gave you context for you didn't have to build a pretense


it is when steam comes out of your
ears
that you know that there are some
real
forces going on in this mind of ours
and
if we are not careful, then we will
yell
at the little youthful idiots who
do
not know better.

but everything is justified
and every action
and every thing
just a bunch of dizzy toddlers
taking swings at the glory
pinata,

but hey,
idiot:
you missed and
hit
me.

but hey,
idiot:
i understand.

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