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| Children, Sweets and Suicide Bombers | |
| By maipenrai | ||||||||||
| 26 July 2005 | ||||||||||
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nothing to be said, its all in the piece we had stopped by the roadside just for a break, get some fresh air getting out of those mobile coffins was good just to stretch our legs a group of kids, about ten in number approached us smiling, hands out asking for sweets it was good to see smiles, we dont get that many as the kids grew bolder, fooling around more of the younger ones appeared little boys and girls, maybe five or six or younger till we had about fifty kids around us we did not see him the guy in the car he must have increased speed as he sped towards us and the kids next i know i am in hell on earth i did not hear a bang, more of a massive shaking of the ground and the air around us we had three guys down, but the kids, sweet jesus the kids i was screaming like a mad man, hatred in my veins the kids, bits and pieces of the kids strewn around the ground the wounded we tried to treat but a kid with no legs is hard to save screaming parents, screaming marines, screaming kids body parts, blood and bones and pain, lord so much pain why did he detonate so near the kids i can understand him wanting us but why the kids ?
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