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Tide ebbed for ever
By BrianRobertNeal
02 June 2007
The more things changr]e the more they stay the same-if only! A lament.



Stood on dock’s disused tidal gate,
Looking toward dismasted hulk,
That had been lazily scuttled.
Mere shorn lamb carelessly ruddled,
With signs stating “Dangerous Bulk”.
Example of throwaway trait.

For in the old days it had been,
Plying trade between continent,
Never ballast ever cargo.
Iron ore, green sand, copra, mango.
Anything that paid its percent.
Sadly steamers sank sail serene

Turning round to look at the dock,
Which pleasure crafted the canal,
That no longer reached out to sea,
Just gate and silted estuary.
Reduced to synthetic banal
Heritage Park and inland lock.

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Plus sa change
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 2nd June 2007
As you say, whoever made up that saying couldn't have been more wrong. This reminded me of an old Roger McGough poem where England had been turned into a themed pleasure park where -"the sad eye'd clowns who man the machines once indeed were free " 
The odd thing is the next generation will look back at this as the golden age; and so it goes. 
A thought provoking piece 
J
Hi BBS
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 3rd June 2007
"A thought provoking piece" 
 
Thankyou. 
 
This Poem is on several levels, the literal, the allegorical and the personal. 
 
A key line 
 
" Never ballast ever cargo." 
 
Brian 

Written by ellyb39 (79 comments posted) 4th June 2007
So sad to think of those once proud and bustling places and ships reduced to this. 'reduced to synthetic banal' like so much of our history.

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