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| Tainted shadow | |
| By Snow-Bear | ||||||
| 04 June 2007 | ||||||
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Hi all, just wondered what yeah all think of this. It was silence and peace I yearned for instead I was shunned and outcasted by all to the path I walk, taking each step forward In to the freezing night, I walked to see the waters showing the reflection of my soul. I looked upon the heavens, but only to see the Silhouette of the moon and stars Shining brightly overhead Dispersing the doubt, but yet the silhouette of my shadow still remain Casting doubt upon myself for I am still hesistant to 'trust' this path I walk upon Feeling the sorrow and sadness, to stare at the moon and stars From this freezing night To see if the heavens will accept me from this plight and show me their light. (C)Snow-bear 2006
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