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| I Saw Him Once | |
| By onlyhattie | ||||||||||
| 04 June 2007 | ||||||||||
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This is my first attempt at a non-rhyming poem. Enjoy! I saw him Once A ship amongst a sea of storms My heart is breaking I saw the lights go out as you fell away from me (she loved you) You were a frantic shadow in my life Darting, Running, Swearing, Fighting I saw you move further from me And your voice could whisper death upon my heart (my time has come) But then the rain came It fell sweet and cool against hot words Angry words meant to hurt (please don’t be mad) I sit alone above my dreams No longer can I hear you The cries, the shots, the chants are gone I am alone with the wind (but remember me) We can recall what it was we had Before all this Before the pain and the sorrow Deep down, all we wanted Was to be wanted ourselves
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