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Poetry
The Grin
By goingtothedogs
07 June 2007
Idle speculation only, and not in fact written in a mood of depression at all... Cool



What use is a grin?
For what purpose is it intended?

It is not a poetic word

So let us seek a poetic word

Many would prefer “smile”
Perhaps
And that is not the same

And that is all there is to prefer

Unless one cares for “smirk”
An altogether unpleasant word
For my taste

It is odd

Should one wish to weep, then
One may also
Cry,
Bawl
Bemoan
Wail
Keen
Grieve
Lament
Sigh or sob

And the poet may use any one of these

But should one wish to grin
Then that is the end of it
No other word there is
For this most human of aspects

And no poet ever used it

Why should the human condition require
That unhappiness should have
An entire lexicon at its disposal?

And yet
Broad joy
And happiness
And love of life…….
And its expression

Should have only one word?

Reviews

Written by Janie (265 comments posted) 7th June 2007
Beam? i like beam, it lights up a face..grin is all teeth, bucked ones at that and often doesn't reach the eyes..grin is an ugly word isn't it..not at all like your poem..very museful..is that a word? 
 
enjoyed reading.

Written by goingtothedogs (58 comments posted) 8th June 2007
Museful? Not sure if it's a word, but I like it. 
 
Beam?? Yes, nice one. I may have to do "The Grin" MK II. 
 
And I agree, it's an ungraceful word to attach to the best of emotions, tho' I'm not sure about the buck teeth. 
 
Thanks for the comment :grin

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 8th June 2007
I can't decide what I think about this one...it made me smile for sure. I did feel like it should have been short prose though. Grin is perhaps too close to grim lol. 
 
Elli

Written by goingtothedogs (58 comments posted) 8th June 2007
Interesting isn't it, what an unpopular word it is?

Written by wltshr (300 comments posted) 8th June 2007
A grin from a child is charming and uplifting but perhaps, in adulthood, the association with having to "grin and bear it" changes the meaning somewhat. 
 
Enjoyed 
 
Wltshr

Written by goingtothedogs (58 comments posted) 8th June 2007
Mmmm.... more and more intriguing. I'll give it a few more days to see if I get any more of this kind of feedback, and then I think I definitely should do Grin MkII
reminds me ....
Written by Bagheera (680 comments posted) 8th June 2007
:grin .... of a chant I heard once at a football match: 
 
"Why d'you think we all hate porrige? 
There ain't many words what rhyme wiff Norwich ....." :eek

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