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| Death Drinks Rum n' Coke | |
| By TallTaler24 | ||||||||||
| 07 June 2007 | ||||||||||
“I don’t think I’m the man you’re looking for,” said Jerry, swinging the bar stool around to greet the confused face staring back at him, “my name is Jerry Charleston.” “Oh,” said the man, “not Peter?” “Sorry.” There was a moment of awkward silence. The tall stranger looked around the local pub, still keeping close to Jerry’s chair. He smiled warmly. He leaned over to Jerry’s ear, “Then I’m not supposed to be seen by you yet.” “Oh, no? Well, why don’t you have a seat, and I’ll do my best to look the other way.” Jerry winked and chuckled. The third beer of the night improved his humour, or at least his self-appreciation for it. No reaction came from the composed man, other than checking his watch. “I suppose I have a little bit of time.” He took a seat on the end stool next to Jerry and started picking at his cuticles. Jerry noticed the restless behaviour. “Looks like you need to chill out. You’re all fidgety-like. What are you having?” “Rum and coke, please. With lime.” The stranger stopped picking and folded his arms over the bar table. “Cindy, get this man a drink, will you? He’s starting to make me feel sober.” A woman behind the bar smiled and reached for a tumbler. Jerry turned back toward his new friend. “What’s your name?” “Death.” “Dell?” “No. Death. I’m waiting for Peter.” The corner of the bar that hosted the newly introduced couple fell silent amidst the crowded room. Jerry’s partner resumed grooming his cuticles. Cindy placed a coaster down in front of him, followed by the fizzy drink. The stone face gave her a nod. Put it on the tab. The lime was casually squeezed into the glass, and mixed with a thin black straw. Jerry’s beer seemed to drink itself to emptiness. Minutes passed.
Jerry looked at him from the corner of his eye, momentarily analyzing the mysterious man. He wore dark jeans and a green sweatshirt. His hair was curly. He smelled of gasoline.“Can I ask you something?” “Anything.” “Watching people die on a regular basis, you must have a pretty good sense of the best way to go.” “Are you asking me for advice on how to die?” “I just thought it would be a good idea to ask the expert.” “In my experience, Jerry, the happiest souls are those who leave this world in peace.” “Doesn’t everybody?” Death gravely shook his head, ending the conversation. Jerry took large gulps of beer until it was finished, and then quietly spoke again. “My name’s not Jerry.” “I know.” “It’s Peter.” “I know.” He checked his watch again. “You ready?” “Yeah…Hey, this will make a pretty good story about me, huh?” “Definitely. I’ll make sure of it.”
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