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Kivu
By maipenrai
12 June 2007
I am living in hell
not the mythical one
but the real one
here on mother earth,
it is called Kivu.

the suffering is endless
the cries of lost souls
shatter the silence of the night,
the cruelty and killing
goes on day after day,
no respite for the living
no time to mourn the dead,
respect for human rights
a fallacy,
power rules through the gun.

FOUR MILLION
yes
FOUR MILLION.

have died in this place
since the vultures sent
their armies to
loot and rape and destroy the land,
corruption is endemic,
like some vile virus
it as dug deep into the spirit of the land,
the vultures armies have left now,
but they leave behind their
scavenger minnions
the para-militarys and militias.

the blue berets battle
to bring some sense to a senseless world,
where the life of a child
is worth less then a ganja smoke,
under-manned, under-armed
with a mandate of little use
their task is a hopeless one.

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Written by stevetroster (1398 comments posted) 12th June 2007
Typo: it as dug deep into the spirit of the land 
 
Another powerful piece (have read 'support'). 
 
I tip my hat to you that you go willingly to these places...  
 
'Where the life of a child is worth less then a ganja smoke' 
Animal mentality! 
 
...but for me it is a lost cause. 
The tsetse and the virus will eventually put an end to their wicked ways.

Written by maipenrai (780 comments posted) 12th June 2007
Thanks Mate

Written by Phil (6383 comments posted) 12th June 2007
Same comment on caps and punc! 
 
Least effective of the three for me. It does tell a tragic story, but doesn't have that succinct and direct nature of the other two. Perhaps this needs more detail and expanded into real prose. Don't know. The very nature of the content lends this vitality but the words dull it just a little this time.  
 
It's a shitty world we live in. Hard in some ways to relate to all this as we (at least I) have it so easy here in the west. All your pieces (today and previously) have had very important things to tell. I don't know if you're interested in the art or just getting the message out there. With hard work, I think your pieces would go very well accompanying well shot reportage photographs. If you could get some exhibition space this would only help spread your message to wider circles. 
 
Phil
THANKS
Written by maipenrai (780 comments posted) 12th June 2007
Phil thanks mate for your comments, my greatest downfall is my grammer, I am not that good at it mate. 
 
Your idea re going with shot reportage as got my head going and I have come up with a spark, just a spark of an idea. 
 
If anything comes of it you and all the other good folk will be the first to know. 
 
but it is just a spark at the moment :grin :grin :grin

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