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A NIPPED-OFF BLOOM
By Matlock
15 June 2007
This poem trys to convey me feeling of a young girl who grew up with me, but along the line she had an accident while returning to school and eventually died. she never had her dream fulfiled.



A flower springs
Blossoming into a beautiful damsel

She bloomed into maturity
Pure and simple


Even though she lost her cherry
It’s a bloomer not a fable


Fragile, though she was
Hers was nipped off-the bloom


Busy bees never get to smell
Scents of this springing flower


Our friendship blossomed in strata
Unfortunately death took the bloom off


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