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Poetry
gay abandon
By alandavidpritchard
15 June 2007
Let's wrestle like sumo's,
let's frolic like first-timers here on the dune;
Let's samba on the beach of our deliciousness,
to the beat of an old jazz tune...

let's tonguedance the funky tango
and make this night end too soon;
let's fumble like fornicating teenagers,
let's fingerfuck the moon.

Let's write poetry with our bodies,
and writhe to rack and ruin,
let's squeeze all the juice from this moment,
this us -

and wake, tomorrow ...at noon.

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Written by philkent (170 comments posted) 15th June 2007
Raunchy and rollicking, I won't ask what prompted you to write this :grin  
 
and writhe to wrack and ruin, great way to describe something we enjoy but shouldn't be doing.

Written by stevetroster (1601 comments posted) 15th June 2007
Philkent, my opinion of you has suddenly changed. 
Gay abandon??? 
Is this two geezers? 
"Let's wrestle like sumo's" 
And fat ones at that!!! 
 
Best wishes 
Steve (no FF required here thank you)

Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 16th June 2007
good write Alan. 
bernie

Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 17th June 2007
Full of energy and zest. 
 
Phil

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