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COUNTRYSIDE
By Matlock
16 June 2007
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Mother nature displays its beauty, when the sun rises in the east

The green trees, lushing grasses; the gentle breeze all says ‘good morning’.

 
The acrobatic squirrels, bust rats, rabbits and the birds too; The wonderful sight of these creatures makes one feel relaxed, cosy, positive and inspired. It reminds one of the tales of Genesis – creation.

 
Another side of nature’s beauty is exposed, the sun – sets in the West then comes dawn! Birds fly home, rodents prepare for mischief and squirrels take to their heels.

 
Yeah! Good – night cloaks the earth with its blankets and I have to go under one myself.

At this juncture everything whistles – sleep, sleep, and sleep.

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Countryside
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 16th June 2007
I'm not sure that this constitutes a "poem". It would be very nice if you were to develop it as a piece of interesting prose. Why did you think it was a poem?

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