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THE MESSAGES
By JohnnyD
17 June 2007
This poem is dedicated to all the mothers, fathers, aunties, uncles, brothers, sisters, wives, friends, lovers and cousins - who have lost their dear ones in THE WAR!

THE MESSAGES

 
As thoughts travel to the battlefront

Expecting messages in replies

They shudder and shiver

By the missing bullets and bombs

 
Sitting in the balcony

Eyes closed, hair raising

The mere thoughts are disrupted

As they return without any messages

 
Dead bodies all around

There is no one to deliver the messages

As thoughts gather courage

To see the unforeseen scenario

 
Tears rolling down the eyes

Clenching fists, folded hands

Pray, pray and pray endlessly

For the messages to arrive

 
The bullets find their targets

The bombs embrace the bodies

Even before the thoughts could reach again

The messages ultimately arrive from the battlefront

 
Brothers, sons, fathers, uncles, cousins, nephews, husbands, friends, lovers

There are messages of everyone

Happy thoughts dare the inevitable

Anticipating the messages

 
They arrive! Yes, they do finally

Wrapped in the flags of the nation

The messages are delivered

With great honour in coffins!

 
Johnny D
11th June 2007

 

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Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 17th June 2007
It is differcult to say much about such a painful subject, the loss of life, the return of bodies in flag draped coffins, differcult to understand the loss suffered by reletives. 
 
well done on this 
Bernie

Written by JakeWilding (4 comments posted) 17th June 2007
very moving poem, i like it as i'm into war poets such as Wilfred Owen and Siegfried Sassoon
Hello Johnny
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 17th June 2007
This is a very moving poem indeed. Things don't change, especially mankind. The complete waste of young human life is so awful. But it is not only the death of people that is so awful. Look at the poor children who are abducted and turned into child soldiers etc. Look at the lives of those left to live after the astrocities. How do they cope psychologically? Young minds destroyed by evil. Dreadful - and something which we all think about, unless we are brain dead, surely! Where is LOVE in this world?

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