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Adrenaline Junkie
By arrowsmith10
17 June 2007
Not sure about a few bits and pieces, hence the / and () bits.. any help would be wonderful!

L xX

Adrenaline junkie

I feel it surge through my veins,

The thrill of the kill,

Invigorating.


I step back (to catch my breath)

Admiring my work of art

A flawless finish

Another rush


The pool of blood surrounds me,

Crimson

Rich and luxurious in colour,

strong and defiant.

against my victim’s perfect porcelain skin

Another kick.


I trace the initial strangulation marks,

Invigorated


The bruising is beautiful,

Deep purple, like a ripe juicy plum

The blue reminiscent of an angry sky


I move to the wrists,

Running my fingers along the clinical cuts.

So clean and crisp.


The rush is ebbing...

I thirst for more,

Never satisfied,


I am the adrenaline junkie.

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Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 17th June 2007
BUT the title. This is wicked, but lose the last line and rename it - you've got really good freaky imagery and I love all of it, especially the angry blue sky, bizarrely enough I know exactly what you mean there! 
 
enjoyed it, 
keep writing 
 
clo x

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