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The joust
By Fledermaus
24 June 2007
The knight pressed his heels into the side of his steed and urged it forwards. He felt the muscles under him and pushed his knees against the beast's powerful body. The cloth of the caparison rustled, and he clenched his shield firmly. Hoofs thundered upon the sandy ground and he pressed the lance against his armpit.
A terrible sound echoed over the jousting field as wood crashed into iron. The weapon was splintered, yet his opponent was still in the saddle.
The maidens cheered, the nobles applauded. Conan rode towards the tent and the pageboy held out a new lance.
" This time you'll crush the Saxon churl", he said.

Conan laughed. Saxon churl... Hear the Norman speaking. He looked at the yellow lions upon the bloodred flag. Ironic that it needed Vikings to cast these villains back into the sea.
" For Normandy!", the boy yelled.
Conan nodded.
" Normandy...", he muttered.

He turned his mount, and looked at the black armoured thane. What right did an Anglo-Saxon have to this land?
" Your lady is watching, sir Conan. Win for her."

He looked at the stand, where the Welsh girl sat. Her fiery red locks were covered with a green headdress, but he would recognize her posture and her snow white skin from afar, even if she would dress like a serf. She was as proud and independent as her people. Oh how surprised she had been when this invader knew her language.
" You have a funny accent", were the first words she had said to him, but she was nevertheless pleased that he chose the native tongue over French or English.

" Buddugoliaeth!", he heard her cry, and he saw how she raised her small fist. Her bracelets and rings sparkled in the light of the summer sun.
He laughed and raised his gauntled in reply.
" Buz! Breizh ha Kemre!"

He saw how the pageboy frowned.
" Sir?"
" When in Britain, learn their tongue, good boy."

And then he spurred his horse and shot forward. Clouds of dust were kicked up into the air, the people shouted, the hoofs were like wardrums. The knights rushed at eachother and colided violently.
Conan's lance banged against the other man's shield, yet although his arm was strong, the Saxon's legs were not, for he was thrown out off the saddle. With a noisy thud he came down. His horse ran forth as if it did not miss its rider, yet Conan guided his steed towards the fallen opponent.

" It seems you are defeated, sir knight. Take off your helmet, so that I can see who you are."

The Saxon nodded, and did as he was told. Conan smiled.

" Sir Ivanhoe... What a surprise... Still fighting for a lost cause? The Normans have taken Albion, just as the Saxons stole it. Learn to live with it."

Reviews

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 24th June 2007
Back to history F. 
 
Coincidentally, Ivanhoe has a connection with my home town of Doncaster. Not sure what it is though. 
 
Simple story showing some of the mixed history of Britain. Enjoyed. 
 
Phil

Written by Fledermaus (3307 comments posted) 24th June 2007
Thanks Phil. 
In books and films the Normans are usually the bad-guys, who oppress the poor Saxons. While ironically the Normans seemed far more tolerant than the Saxons when they took Britain. Add to that the backbone of William the Conquerer's army was made up of Bretons, and there's a nice story of the Britons/Bretons hitting back at the Saxons, six centuries after they fled to France. 
With some effort I think Welsh and Bretons must be able to understand eachother. Their languages are probably not more different from eachother than Dutch and German.

Written by philkent (157 comments posted) 24th June 2007
A fair point made in a very well written manner. 
 
Although I've always been of the opinion there was a fair old amount of celtic blood slooshing around in the English dna by the time of the invasion, it was certainly a dominant Anglo-Saxon culture that pervaded. That the Bretons made up a substantial amount of the Norman force does smack of karma. 
 
Enjoyed this a lot.
Hi Fledermaus
Written by jean.day (2283 comments posted) 24th June 2007
I enjoyed reading this - and do like the idea of getting history in small easy to grasp, personalised bits like this.  
 
It was a nice touch, adding that bit of Welsh in there (I presume that was what is was.)
a further point ........
Written by Bagheera (683 comments posted) 24th June 2007
......... following on from jean's comment [above] 
 
THIS would be an excellent way of creating a real taste for living history in a [??primary??] school classroom situation. 
 
If you can create a series of similar 'vignettes' of comparable quality showing other aspects of history, you might well be onto a winning formula for a really USEFUL set of class books .... surely there's MEGABUCKS to be made from this, history books (esp. for primary schools!!) are appallingly dull, drear, inaccurate and [often] out-of-date by the time they're printed.... :eek :grin  
 
Excellent writing, really involves the reader!

Written by Fledermaus (3307 comments posted) 25th June 2007
Thanks Philkent, Jean and Bagheera. 
Phil: I'm not sure about what happened to the Celts that stayed behind. Apparantly recent studies suggested some sort of ethnic cleansing, although I think that's highly doubtful. Yet indeed culturally England was Germanic, and there is disappointingly little Celtic left in English. In fact there's a lot more Celtic influence in French :grin  
 
Jean: The girl speaks Welsh, the knight Breton. "Buddugoliaeth" is Welsh for victory, just as "buz" is the Breton word (thanks to my dictionaries ;)). 
 
Bagheera: Do you think so? Within a few months I have to go find a job, and that'd be a dream job eh :grin Hm, maybe I should try to find out who publishes that sort of books.

Written by Asferthecat (834 comments posted) 25th June 2007
Ivanhoe rings a vague bell. I enjoyed the description of jousting etc but I regret the historical nuances are lost on me due to lack of knowledge. 
If only our history class had had the sort of book envisaged by Bagheera I might have found history more interesting. 
Go for it. 
Perhaps you should check the curriculum and write appropriate vignettes. 

Written by TwistedTales (548 comments posted) 26th June 2007
Liked this very much. Written in a simple easy to understand manner and that's exactly what you need in historical fiction pieces such as these.  
 
Regards, 
TT

Written by Fledermaus (3307 comments posted) 26th June 2007
Thanks TT. I'm very glad it worked.

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