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Bar Stool philosophers #1 |
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By Minimango
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24 June 2007 |
There is sometimes truth in lager
Scene : Typical English pub
Two men are sitting at the bar, sipping slowly
at their bitter.
MAN 1: So
what do you think about god? Do you think he exists?
At that moment, the barmaid calls out last orders.
The lights in the bar flash. She then
quickly disappears into the back, thus denying them their last pints.
MAN 2: Well, there is something out there working against us, that’s for sure.
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Written by wltshr (300 comments posted) 25th June 2007 | Hi Minimango This is quite a pleasant gag and well constructed. It's difficult to review this without knowing if there is a series of gags still to come from these characters. I'll just have to wait and see. Regards Wltshr
| Written by Phil (6393 comments posted) 25th June 2007 | Clearly constructed, amusing, but not side-splittingly funny. As a stand alone gag, not sure it could hold its own. As part of a quick fire sequence, it could work well. Phil. |
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