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| Each Black Wrinkle | |
| By gutterkitty | ||||||||||
| 24 June 2007 | ||||||||||
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I wrote this about a month ago; it's one of those pieces that comes out all at once, and I think you can tell. The introduction of the "you" and the medical metaphor seems a bit misplaced to me...or perhaps it is completely nonsensical...Let me know :) I put up a hand to halt the sun. It blinds, levers up the skin like a chisel, hammered in by the sky. I have no call for sunshine, it rests uneasy on my lids, exposes, makes all naked. The dark cracks hidden at the corner of the eye, in the garden paving stones, are thrown forward, silhouetted. Each black wrinkle smoothed by a light touch, now examinable, each mistake stretched into detail, like a concertina. The table of the sky now cleared, as if for a dissection. Perhaps I will give you the instruments, before the hot days come, let them glint a moment on the palm. Now split me open, take out the dark stuff if you can: this sun beneath my skin is white, it hugs your eyes, keeps you from looking in.
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