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LOVE PUNISHES ENDLESSLY
By JohnnyD
26 June 2007

LOVE PUNISHES ENDLESSLY

 

How much ever I have tried

To forget you O’ my sweetie!

You keep on haunting my life endlessly

 

You keep on increasing my woes

Knowing well, I am dying a thousands death

Having lost you in the journey of life!

 

Even though I miss you every single day of my life

Why at all you are haunting my life sweetie?

You don’t seem to be happy at all, why?

 

In thoughts, dreams and in memories

How much ever I try

You are always in front or with me O’ my sweetie!

 

Even though we are lost in the journey of life

Please O’ my love don’t punish me endlessly

By being so near yet not being there, for me

 

If at all you had really loved me

Why at all did you walked away?

Increasing my woes of being in love O’ so endlessly!

 
Johnny D

18th August 2003

Reviews
Genius!
Written by Talisker (1336 comments posted) 26th June 2007
Just sheer genius - nothing else! 
 
Oli

Written by stevetroster (1601 comments posted) 26th June 2007
As a colonial cousin I am quite happy to give you poetic licence for the grammatical accuracy of this work of art. 
The sentiment of lost love just shines through in this piece, and golly! Even Oli believes that it is sheer genius!!! Mayhap he is learning something about emotion over formation?? 
 
Best wishes 
Steve.

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