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| Heavenly Snapshot - scene 3 | |
| By jean.day | ||||||||||||||||
| 27 June 2007 | ||||||||||||||||
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All real people, including the photographer, although we don't have any christening pictures. You'll be pleased to know that the service was truncated.
Scene 3. March 25th, 1871 The stage opens in a church, St. Mary’s in Worthing, Sussex, with the main feature being the baptismal font. There is a stained glass window effect at the back of the stage, and a side altar, stage right,with a cross on it. Lying on the altar are two candles, a sea shell, two white cloths, some pieces of paper and a quill pen and bottle of ink. There are two already lit candles on each side of the altar. The Ghostly Burgess girls have already arrived and are circling the font, but giving a bit of distance for the action which will be taking place later. Other characters in this scene: George Burgess Bennett (Born 1815, aged 56 - son of Ann Botting Bennett - and therefore grandson of Jane Burgess the ghost. Smartly dressed for a successful businessman - as he is a grocer and house agent. Worthing by this time is quite a seaside resort, so he has done well. Rebecca King (Born 1833, aged 38 - daughter of Sarah King, and the granddaughter of the Ghost Sarah Burgess) Rebecca and George are cousins. Smartly dressed in the fashion of the time and looking pretty. Mary Ann Johnstone, nurse, aged 25, holding baby Winifred Mary (Born 1870 - 7 months old, dressed in white gown, wrapped in shawl). Dressed in Nurses’ uniform. Lucy Duffield, aged 17, holding the hand of James Robinson Burgess (Born 1869) 18 months old, also dressed in white outfit - more appropriate to a girl than a boy. Percy, aged 5, Sailor suit. George King, aged 4, identical sailor suit Kathleen, Aged 3, ruffly fancy dress Rev. Charles Ough, minister in Church of England, although not of this parish, dressed in clerical black. Thomas Bayfield, Photographer, dressed in working suit, but there for business, rather than pleasure. As the scene opens, the Ghosts are whispering (as it is in church) Sarah: As I picked this snapshot, I should tell you a bit about who I picked and why. But it is nice that this family gathering includes your grandson, Jane, and my granddaughter, Rebecca. My oldest daughter, Sarah, named after me, of course, had three sons, and then she produced her first daughter, Sarah, then four years later she had Rebecca, and then another girl a few years later, Agnes. But Rebecca was such a lovely little girl, when I knew her. She was pretty and polite and I always wondered what would be her fate. So that is why I chose her. Jane: And even though this isn’t my choice, I am getting the bonus of seeing my grandson George. He was named by his mother, my first daughter Ann, after our father, George Burgess. I was so pleased with that. He hadn’t yet married Rebecca before I died. She is quite a lot younger than he is. He lived at home helping his father with the grocery business all those years. But I am pleased that he seems to have a life of his own now. Hush, I can hear someone coming.Rev. Ough: Let me see, is there water in the font? (He checks) Yes there is. Is there two candles on the altar nearby? (He checks) Yes, there are. Do I have the white cloths for each of the children? (Again checks) Yes I do. I am ready. Ah, here they are now. How nice to see you. Please come in and gather round the font. George: Hello, Charles, or I suppose I should call you Rev. Ough since we are here on official business. (shaking hands) It has been ages since I saw you, but I am so pleased that you were able to come and help us out with this christening business. How fortunate that you were on holiday here by the seaside, and that the Church allowed you to do it on their premises. Rev. Ough: Well, I have taken some services and preached many sermons while I have been here, so they do not consider me a stranger. But we must get on with the business. We can chat later. George: I don’t believe you have met my wife, have you? This is Rebecca. And these are our older children, Percy, five, George, four, and Kathleen three. They have already been done. And these are the two candidates, Winifred, who is just seven months, and her nurse, Miss Johnstone, and little James Robinson, who is only a year and a half and our other nurse, Miss Duffield. We didn’t have time to have him done with the next baby on the way so quickly - so now we get two for the price of one, heh? Rev. Ough:( laughing) Spoken like the business man that I know you are. Now who are to be the godparents? George: Oh, various relatives, but we can just use the nurses as proxies for today, can’t we? Rev. Ough: Well, yes, but I shall require the true godparents names for the register. Have you asked their permission, and were they willing to take on the tasks? It is not something to take lightly, you know. Rebecca: Certainly we have asked their permission, and I’ll have you know that one of them is your estranged wife, Jane. She didn’t want to come today, for obvious reasons. But we will provide all the details for the forms when the service is over. George: No need to get uppity about it, Rebecca. Let’s try to keep friends through this. After all, Charles is a boyhood friend of mine as well as my ex-brother-in-law.
Rev. Ough: Yes, well, enough said. Let’s get on then. I’ll just find the place in my book. (He finds the right page and starts muttering the prayer.) Thomas Bayfield: Is this the Bennett Christening?
George: Yes, it is. Are you the photographer?
A few minutes of awkward posing, with nobody saying anything. Thomas: I think that will do it. He shakes hands with George. Then he picks up his equipment. Thomas Bayfield: I’ll send you the proofs and my bill as soon as the picture is developed.
He rushes off, and the others collect themselves together, and walk out of church, talking amongst themselves. George keeps near Rev. Ough as they are leaving. George: You will come back to the Steynes Hotel with us for a little party, won't you? Our cousins the Cortises run it. I expect you remember Cousin George? (All go off stage except the ghosts. ) Jane: Oh, the Cortises are my relatives too. Goody, I will really have a treat today. Sarah: And this was supposed to be my choice. Maria: Well, it seems to be that just about everybody is related to everybody else, so they are all relatives of all of us. Sarah: The service went well, didn’t it? I almost started crying when he said the little boy’s name was James Robinson. That was my dear husband’s name. Of course, we called our first son that too, but it is so nice to know he is being remembered even all these long years after he has died. Mary: I notice that the girl wasn't called Jane or Sarah. Sarah: Well, I expect they may still have time to have some more before they are finished. (They smile and bow their heads to say a prayer for their new grandchildren - and the curtain closes.) .
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