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| a mirror | |
| By aleatoric_rhetoric | ||||||||
| 30 June 2007 | ||||||||
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A take on the Socratic "An unreflected life is not worth living." a mirror's duty right and priviledge is eyes meeting thine own eyes perplection at the amazement to the scorn: the containment of perspective: this perspective that is trying to matter by making matters by the willingness to inhale or the easeness of bail backs turned and eyes removed "who am i and what am i doing?" all observers long to be observed our light shining upon witnesses turning them into prophets "i am... .... ............. ? ...." and the light exclaims "you are. you are! you are." any reflective thinking during moments where you draw the human eyes cause missed notes, missed shots, missed takes and mistakes the backdrop of fingersnaps is the open embrace of God Almighty the dropping of a handfull of coins in my open felt accordion case is my creed in synthesia the eery silence after having poured your essence: after having refracted your reflection into the eyes of concave mirrors is either the sound God heard concluding the sixth day or the sound we will hear when there will be days no longer in every moment a world's perspective, a human's glance, there is life-- sustaining and there is death-- conclusion--- but there is ressurrection there is cycle a mirror's duty is to set before us thine own eyes i touch my own cheek and feel then i recall the feeling of when another touched my cheek and i hear an entire symphony of a past seven teen years the oscillation of life like the oscillation of every pitch of every note of every frequency and frequently i will return to mirrors and i will reflect on the performance i have just witnessed and it is a mirror's stunning stamina to end the mus ic long enough for my mind to piece it all to gether and they say that it is fallacy that the human mind narrit izes: that it makes shit up for the sake of their own sanity my story is my story my music is the music i will recite for the God of harmony, rhyme scheme, understanding She will sit before me and ask me gently to tell Her about myself: tell her about the life I lived and when I finish my eyes will be moist from crying my belly will ache from laughing my shoulders will be sore from shrugging (i'll start and end with a shrug: She'll understand) then i'll hear the eery silence after having poured your essence: after having refracted your reflection into the eyes of concave mirrors and it is either either the sound God heard concluding the sixth day or the sound we will hear when there will be days no longer
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