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| By no1butClo | ||||||||||||||
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OH GOOD LORD isn't the ending awful? I sort of lost all concentration and couldn't finish it properly... would love advice on the first two stanzas, and I promise to work on the rest :) clo x ps ta for all the reviews on awake, I shall endeavour* to return the favour [*and spell that word porperly] Enter, come on in, feast your eyes. Let our strobe-lights short-circuit your minds while we're busy running trip-wires round your ankles. With your own shadows we fool you into corners, and leave you there, eyes wide, as you realise your skin wasn't that colour before. Acrid smoke, our halls of mirrors, make you wish you never came, forget why, then shove you from a sidedoor. Alleyway, pinprick, one, retreating, black-clad back.
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