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Drama Scripts
Heavenly Snapshot - scene 5
By jean.day
01 July 2007
A bit on the short side this one, but there wasn't a lot to say, going by the entries on the census. Some of the other branches were having lots of interesting things happen, but i felt it only fair to give each sister a chance.

Scene 5

March 25, 1891

Scene: Horsham, Sussex, 9 Anna Lodge, the scene is the dining room, similar to that for scene 2, except the furnishing touches are all funereal. The table is set for 6. The three women are sat at the table. The Ghost cast are all standing around behind the table.

Extra Cast members:

Eliza Sharp: aged 78 (Ann’s daughter-in-law), dressed in black.

Eliza Sharp, aged 38, unmarried daughter, also dressed in black.

Ann Sharp, aged 43, unmarried daughter, also dressed in black.

  Elizabeth: Oh, Ann, this is so sad. Why did you have to pick this place for us to visit?Ann: If I had been allowed to pick earlier, it would have been a happier scene. If I had got 1861, I might have even seen my son alive, but now not only he, but others are missing.

Eliza senior: Let us bow our heads and pray. Dear Lord, we wish to speak tonight, on this, the anniversary of our dear son and brother James’ death, for the repose of his soul. May he rest in peace. And dear God, please let his other brother, Charles return to us. I know that his brother’s death hit him hard, but for him to throw in the business, and for him to go off and none of to know where he is, that is too much.

Eliza Junior: At least we know where William is, and I’m sure tonight he will be thinking of James too.

Ann: He could have come. He said he had business to attend to, but he knew how important this was for mother, to have this special meal together in memory of James who died 10 years ago tonight. He was so young, only 31. (she sobs a bit)

Eliza senior: I think it was Marianne, his wife, who told him to stay away tonight. She doesn’t like me. She knows that I am waiting and waiting for her to produce a grandchild for me, and she will not do it. She keeps wanting to help William in his job, and she is too selfish to make the effort to have children. I would like to see a grandchild before I die.

Ann: Oh, mother, stop talking like that. You are not going to die for a long time yet. You are a picture of health.

Eliza senior: And what of you, my daughters. When I am gone, who will look after you? Charles, if he had stayed, could have kept up the milling business. We were making a good living out of that. And William, well, don’t expect him to invite you to live with him. She will have something to say about that I am sure.

Eliza: We could get jobs if we needed to, Mother. We could support ourselves, but let’s not talk of such things tonight. Let’s have our meal, and remember our beloved James, gone to his rest, this day in 1881. May he rest in peace.

Ann (Ghost): Oh dear, it sounds like our family line will soon be ended. Maria: Well there are lots of other strands to keep going, Ann. I never even had children, so how do you think I feel?Ann: Who would think that having somebody to carry on your name and your memories could mean so much? I think I want to go home now. I wish I had never come back.

Curtain closes.

Reviews

Written by Phil (6393 comments posted) 1st July 2007
Funny how carrying on the family line is important. Perhaps it a stab at immortality. A little bit of the older generation being passed onto the new etc. 
 
Quite a project you've got going here Jean. I wonder if any other geneologists have presented their findings like this - or in any other creative way? 
 
Still enjoying. 
 
Phil.
Thanks Phil
Written by jean.day (2196 comments posted) 3rd July 2007
I do think having the family name carried on is very important to a lot of people. But the nice thing this family did - and I'm sure it was true in many families, they gave the mother's maiden name as a middle name to at least one if not all of their children. It does make looking up family history details so much easier.  
 
I don't really think this method of presenting family trees is likely to have many takers somehow. The real thing demands accuracy in detail. I'm fudging things if it suits my story.  

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