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| Catching Swallows | |
| Written by fellpony | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| 03 July 2007 | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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Chipeep! Chipeep! Children, the nest too small for all five, you must step off and fly, yes it will bear you, step off – circle and land, the spider-woven beams your runway, fly children, fly, chipeep! Nervously erect aristocrat of the skies, a spare, taut navysuited mother with her red bib and pink tinted blouse, worrying over her children. The brood she has reared, in this inhospitable summer, hunch together cupped in a featherlined house of mud. Chipeep! Chipeep! Children, the air is rough and the midges few; I can’t feed you all, so big you are grown, fly children, fly, chipeep, chipeep! The cold makes them slow. They tumble and flutter down onto hay bales. A burst of sunshine warms them and for a minute they are perched along the top of the half-door, white gape-folds making dissatisfied statements on their small beaked faces. They face the wind, ruffled and uncomprehending. When it dislodges them they fall, and squat, navy suits crumpled, tails outspread, and both parents shriek as they swoop and glide. Chipeep! Chipeep! Children! Cats, weasels! stoats, owls! Children, wake, stir yourselves, fly! Cattle will crush you, horses tread over you, even slow humans capture and injure you, fly, you must fly! Chipeep! Speed is their life. Flying their brilliance. Air is their medium, and thousands of miles have streamed under their wings since last year when they were children here. A falsely bright spring and unpractised youth have brought them to ragged thinness, feeding the large and hungry brood who, in the pinch, are dull; the weather cold, battering winds, food hard to gather, the rain heavy and sticking the feathers. Chipeep! Chipeep! Children, why do you sit dazedly staring skywards, flip your young wings and fly, lift onto air and live! It is evening, and the stones grow chill. The mare does not crush them as she walks in. The dog cannot reach them from his rope. The wife lifts them from her path. Numbed as they are, naïve, they cling to fingers with small black claws, sharp as wires. They are no use to her; no egg or flesh worth coveting, no down for pillows. Yet she scoops the clustered young, the light ephemeral fragments of breathing feather; places them softly on a hay bale, nestled close for warmth. It is her gesture to beauty, to the mystery that should guide them to Africa; to hope.
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